Freeform Poetry Exercise (5min)
Posted on Jun 12th, 2008
by
Eric
negativity surrounds
rushes to low ground
like water searching
for the most minute crack
in our shells
only our energy can shield us
once in it multiplies like a virus
left unchecked it can wreck a life
with its many trysts and turns
it will shrivel your heart,
turn you cold before your time
to the light, you'll be blind
and find yourself ostracized.
separated from all but it,
negativity.
you will still remember when
it was reviled like bitter poison
instead of embraced like a lover's kiss
you alone have the power
to break yourself free from this false bliss

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this reminds me of Christopher's poetry… thanks! have a wonderful weekend
You too Nicole. Thank you! Who's Christopher?
jeepdog - check his blog